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About Me Member Angsty Poet ravenofyoursoul776621/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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Waiting for this One Day

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Fri Nov 9, 2007, 12:22 AM
I once heard a story straight from the heart
About a girl and how her world began to fall apart

It all started when she met the boy that made her life complete, Just thinking of him made her heart skip a beat

They were the couple everyone wanted to be
There were no imperfections as either one could see

As the weeks passed they fell more in love and were less aware, Of how often life turns out to be unfair

Until one day she finally gave in
She realized there was no way she could win

She said I'm sorry but i have to let you go
As he reached for her hand she pulled away whispering no

When she turned around a tear slid down her cheek
He just stood there speechless, forgetting how to speak

The next few days were the hardest at home
She truly felt she was all alone

Her mom pushed in her face how she had won
Her dad said "i knew he was just another one"

Her sister said "come on you'll be ok"
And her brother just tried to stay away

At school it was like her friends weren't even there
None of them seemed to really care

Her life had no more color, just black and white
Even getting out of bed turned into a fight

Despite their tries things just weren't like before
Then he decided "i don't wanna try anymore"

At that she tried to cut him out
But the more she ignored him the more her feelings began to shout

When she saw him that day she could no longer just walk by
And before she knew it her mouth opened up and out came "hi"

He looked up and said "so now we're talking?"
She just smiled and joined in his walking

Everyday they talked a little more
And everyday she began to like him a little less then before

As the months passed by she became more and more aware
About how its ok life's unfair

Because eventually everything becomes your past
But your memories will always last

And with that i hope you see
Not all love is meant to be

But hold on and don't give in
Stand tall, hold up your chin

And believe me when i say
The right one will come one day

He'll open your eyes to things you couldn't ever see
I know this because..this is a story all about me...

  • Mood: Neutral
  • Listening to: Crank That- Soulja Boy
  • Reading: Karens IM's
  • Watching: Random music videos
  • Playing: Not a damn thing.
  • Eating: My lip ring.
  • Drinking: Was soy milk.

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  • Current Residence: Ghetto of Canton
  • Interests: Video Games, Ruining Lives, Downloading Music, and Listening to Music
  • Favourite movie: The Boondock Saints
  • Favourite band or musician: Korn, Pink Floyd, Disturbed, and many more.
  • Favourite genre of music: Death Metal, Speed Metal, Metal, Alternative
  • Favourite poet or writer: Myself
  • Favourite photographer: Nofuckingbody
  • Favourite style of art: Manga
  • Operating System: Umm Windows?
  • MP3 player of choice: Sansa Fuze
  • Shell of choice: Hermit crab shells
  • Wallpaper of choice: Whatever this is
  • Skin of choice: Grilled in a garlic butter sauce?
  • Favourite game: Guitar Hero 3 and Devil May Cry Series
  • Favourite cartoon character: Foamy
  • Personal Quote: Your Face
  • Tools of the Trade: A pen

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:icongothguy720:
hey agame. whats up?

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
:iconravenofyoursoul7766:
n2m how about u?
living in canton
managing a gas station

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~Instead of being smacked with the ugly stick, you must've been running through the forest of ugly.~
:icongothguy720:
ditto. im still in Chagrin....not for long tho. Were moving out to hiram in a bit.

nice. glad to hear that your doing okay.

You may not know it... but i missed you ^_^

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
:iconravenofyoursoul7766:
wow, where is hiram?
im like only an hour or so from like columbus
after the winter tho i may be moving to tennesee
hey u need to re add me on myspace!!
good to hear you're alright as well
i jus put up a new poem, check it out!
jus had me 21st bday!~! it was ok
i missed u too!

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~Instead of being smacked with the ugly stick, you must've been running through the forest of ugly.~
:icongothguy720:
Umm hirams out in portage county...near mantua. Im gonna be going to crestwood.

nice. For real? thats cool.

Yeah i will wahts ur link?

ill go check out ur poem after i post this XD.

Happy 21st birthday!

OH! i played pong for the first time this summer! we were gonna try extreme scrabble but no jager....X_X

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Outreaching the closest left side the city sleeps beneath me
:iconinfernoskull:
what happened to your updates...the "pimp coronals" should be continued....lol, I was intrigued....just know I still think about you and I hope your ok.

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Dead beyond all repair....cold to the touch....lusting for blood....I AM, the night!

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